very nice work. a few points of concerns and corrections 1- spelling mistake page 2 line 4. 2- out of season growth of crops to be discussed. 3-(farm plan to have dairy in future) - this is a real concern. you started with a modern agricultural farm, means you are not talking about a specific farm, its general than. this sentence that i mentioned is inappropriate. 4- write a bit more on dairy products
very nice work.
ReplyDeletea few points of concerns and corrections
1- spelling mistake page 2 line 4.
2- out of season growth of crops to be discussed.
3-(farm plan to have dairy in future) - this is a real concern. you started with a modern agricultural farm, means you are not talking about a specific farm, its general than. this sentence that i mentioned is inappropriate.
4- write a bit more on dairy products
over all great work
ReplyDeleteif you can just review and make it a bit more shorter, if possible, it ll be better.
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