RIJA: YOU NEED TO RE WRITE IT AGAIN, BY ANY MEAN IT CAN NOT BE CONSIDERED AS A SHORT NOTE. IT CAN BE CONSIDERED AS A SUMMARY. SECONDLY AND MOST IMPORTANTLY, THE TOPIC OF THE SHORT NOTE IS "A MODEL AGRICULTURAL FARM" JUST DESCRIBE THE MODEL AGRICULTURAL FARM, LEAVE EVERYTHING REGARDING VISIT AND QUESTIONS ASKED THERE, USE THAT INFORMATION BUT DO NOT PRESENT IT AS IT IS DONE IN LESSON.
A very good attempt, i am really happy to see this, you atleast give it a try. now you are one step closer to your success. keep it up. keep doing the right thing. keep trying.
RIJA: YOU NEED TO RE WRITE IT AGAIN, BY ANY MEAN IT CAN NOT BE CONSIDERED AS A SHORT NOTE. IT CAN BE CONSIDERED AS A SUMMARY.
ReplyDeleteSECONDLY AND MOST IMPORTANTLY, THE TOPIC OF THE SHORT NOTE IS "A MODEL AGRICULTURAL FARM" JUST DESCRIBE THE MODEL AGRICULTURAL FARM, LEAVE EVERYTHING REGARDING VISIT AND QUESTIONS ASKED THERE, USE THAT INFORMATION BUT DO NOT PRESENT IT AS IT IS DONE IN LESSON.
PUNCTUATION MISTAKES ARE NOTED AS WELL.
ReplyDeleteA very good attempt, i am really happy to see this, you atleast give it a try. now you are one step closer to your success. keep it up. keep doing the right thing. keep trying.
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